This week I decided to do away with words because I thought it would be quite fun to do a poem and it really was. The poem was about describing the desert that part in the story was when Stanley went looking for Zero in the desert. The thing I enjoyed doing the most was creating poem lines because I got to do little poem's and It was fun relating it to the story. the easy'st thing was doing the little poem for I can see because you can just about see anything in the desert because of illusions. The hardest part was coming up with idea's of what you can smell in the desert.
I love doing art and writing and reading. I am a year six at ngatea primary school. And I have a lot of friends.
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I like what you have done but you had to do such real looking stuff.
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ReplyDeleteAwesome poem, Willis, I really like the way you have been inspired by our examples but have made it your own. Also you have written a fantastic explanation to go with your poem. Tino pai!
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